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Original Sentence:
Empowering the female disabled in Oman is most evident in the image located in the middle where a young health professional with a minor disability is facing the camera with a smile. The least focused of all the different disabled groups in Oman is male paraplegia or quadriplegia. Their marginalization is signaled by the unfocussed location of the image at the bottom of the page, which makes it the least striking image on the cover. The image, additionally, is of an identifiable man giving his back to the reader whilst facing a paved but bleak future signaled by the dark and stormy clouds lying ahead of him.

Edited Sentence:
Empowering the female disabled in Oman is most evident in the middle image where a young health professional with a minor disability is smiling and facing the camera. The least discussed population of all disabled is consists of male paraplegics or quadriplegics. This population’s marginalization is reflected on Challenge’s cover—it is represented by an image at the bottom of the page, making it the least striking image on the cover. The identifiable man in the image gives his back to the reader and faces a paved but bleak future (signaled by the dark and stormy clouds before him).

 
     
     
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